Comments on: girl at deli counter 51409 http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/2009/05/14/girl-at-deli-counter-51409/ Sun, 04 Oct 2009 14:24:04 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: cdean http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/2009/05/14/girl-at-deli-counter-51409/#comment-2331 cdean Tue, 26 May 2009 06:48:15 +0000 http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/?p=785#comment-2331 'a simple shape cut from galaxies' - something about that little bit strikes me. I enjoy the entire poem. :) ‘a simple shape cut from galaxies’ – something about that little bit strikes me.

I enjoy the entire poem. :)

]]> By: Andy Sewina http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/2009/05/14/girl-at-deli-counter-51409/#comment-2329 Andy Sewina Fri, 15 May 2009 15:42:39 +0000 http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/?p=785#comment-2329 Great title, sounds like a painting, reads like a cool picture too! Great title, sounds like a painting, reads like a cool picture too!

]]> By: Gordon Mason http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/2009/05/14/girl-at-deli-counter-51409/#comment-2328 Gordon Mason Fri, 15 May 2009 14:34:09 +0000 http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/?p=785#comment-2328 Particularly liked "words surrounding her in laurels" and "trees in the past background dancing out her silent name" Particularly liked “words surrounding her in laurels” and “trees in the past background dancing out her silent name”

]]> By: wayne http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/2009/05/14/girl-at-deli-counter-51409/#comment-2327 wayne Fri, 15 May 2009 02:27:23 +0000 http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/?p=785#comment-2327 this is a good write...from the deli..a veggy burger??? this is a good write…from the deli..a veggy burger???

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