triptych, part 2 10208
April 15, 2009Amber brushstrokes over weeding fields
when children gathered to enjoy
trampolines like Sunday communion
Tasting juice boxes
where Four o’clocks bloomed
off schedule
And the sheltie barked at the German shepherd
(for Read.Write.Poem.)
LOL The last line just completes the picture. You couldn’t have ended this one without that line. GREAT job!
http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/procrastinationnapowrimo-15by-tlb.html
great poem..thanks for possting